I'm so tired of meeting n00bs in Rps, so I wanted to share a couple of tips.
1. Always use quotation marks when your character says something.
2. Always use proper grammar. "But Shizune didn't have wanna do is that she asked" means nothing.
3. Don't Godmod. Godmodding is when you make your character invincible. The best way to make sure you don't Godmod is by making sure you take turns in a battle.
4. Make your character realistic. Don't go through the story and make-up random stuff like having a Jinchuuriki randomly. And decking out an Rp character with so many specialities is unrealeastic and Godmodding.
5. Don't stray off from your character's personality because someone does not think your actions are acceptable (unless they are inappropriate). For example, my Rp character Jeanna is not fond of newcomers and has a hard time accepting them. Sanin_94, his Rp character is Gizik, didn't like how she acted. However, an Rp is a story and not about you personally. It doesn't how matter how one person feels.
6. Remember where you are. If some people are fighting miles away, you can't just randomly appear there.
7. Use original jutsu. The Rasengan and Chidori are not original, and neither is combining the two.
8. When you have thoughts, italacisize them.
9. Don't try to control another person's character. That's the most annoying form of Godmodding there is.
10. Have an antecedent for every pronoun so fellow Rpers know who is talking.
Good example: "You're the coolest person ever!" Jeanna said to Kiri. She then started to follow Kiri towards the Hidden Steel Village. I'm so happy to have met someone so awesome. Jeanna thought to herself.
Bad example: but like you i dont want to shut it up yeah so. he said and followed her and started to beat her up and cut her in half and used chidori and killed her. no she scremed.











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thanks for the tips!
"All right! I'm in here" Kiri said reading the tips about fifty times. "I feel loved..."
I generally will put thoughts inlike here ''
Example: 'Whats his problem' Kiri thought
Just because I do thiat in stories and that is how I see it.
Yeah, using the ' are okay for thoughts too.
These are just tips I use and some change for everybody.
The bad example made me laugh.
Hehe, nobody will ever follow this! Lolz
"You're the coolest person ever!" Jeanna said to Kiri. She then started to follow Kiri towards the Hidden Steel Village. I'm so happy to have met someone so awesome. Jeanna thought to herself.
I just realized that people could think Jeanna was lesbian.
LOL, that's great. She does seem really creepy in that example. I'd be scared if I was you.