Maakasu

"Make me feel ALIVE! and get me cookies"

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Hometown: Owen Sound, ON, CA

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About Me

I here because I love the Naruto Franchise and Im loyal to the leaf I love Anime Manga

Some Favorite Characters HINATA,Gaara

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Anime, Naurto, Video games Lacrosse.

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Rock, And Japanese music and classical anime music

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Naruto, fantsy,Manga

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Naruto, Bleach, Anime. .hack

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Naurto the movie , Larry the Cable Guy funny movie or Anime movies

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PlayStation® 2, PLAYSTATION® 3, N 64, Gamecube, Nintendo DS, PC, and Game Boy

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I IF YOU WANT TO READ STORY FIND TITLE AND READ UP SORRY ABOUT THAT i FORGOT.!!!!!!

Posted Apr 22, 2008 by Maakasu | Add a comment |
Chapter 1 still XD

I seen this before a couple of Shinobi came through here before they were quite weird looking bushy brows and bowl cuts I remembered their name Gai and Rock lee. A weird couple in green jump suits. Mr Tainaku Grabbed my arm and pulled me closer and whispered "Listen, head to the village hidden in the leaves that were your parents came from". " the head band was you fathers". He then put the head band into my hands. "Take it and go.......now.......We..loved you like...a son". Then the breathe left his body and died silently.

I was angry now more than ever I stuck the headband in my pocket and after I buried everyone later in the day and prayed I left I was enraged. I wanted to know who or what did this.

When I reached the end of the village I turned around and look back and tried to remember the good times but my mind was to clouded by Anger and Grief. Suddenly a voice came out of no where.

"Tragic...Truly Tragic.....heheheheh. I quickly turned around to see who was there. It was a man with skin as pale as a cloudy mid-winter day, and eyes like a animal. Was this Guy human?

"Who are you?" I demanded "My...my don’t you know its polite to give you name before asking anothers". "Oh well kids these days, my name is Orochimaru". "And yours?"" Im Maakasu" I said to him.

I reached into my pocket to show him the head band but then he cut me off.

"Ahh you heading to the Village hidden in the leaves are you". "Yeah why" I asked "but why would you want to go to such a Pathetic village for". "And beside if you go there you’ll have to start off as I Acadmey Student before you are a shinobi." "Shinobi!" I yelled with excitement. He chuckled "Yes of course I forgot that you don’t know anything about Jutsu's" "How do you know??" I Wondered. "That is no importance". "Oh okay." I said.

"Your eyes are unique" "My eyes Unique how?" I wondered again. "My aren’t you suddenly more curious don’t tell me you don’t know about those eyes of yours?" "No sadly." I said. "The the villagers I lived with said I was cursed....". As I frowned. "Crused?...hehehehheh those people don't know your true potentials." he said with a grin.

"Come and train with me I’ll make you strong,teach you how to use those eyes, besides if you go to train at the village you’ll have to train with eight to ten year olds." "Whoa no way" I quickly said. "I shall know tell you about your eyes," "those eyes are unique because they’re the Sharigan and the Byakugan. The Hyuuga and the Uchiha intresting." "But the clans aren’t supposed to marry." "They might kill you I suggest you wear a bandage around your eyes if you go there.""They’ll what." I was surprised.

  

Posted Apr 22, 2008 by Maakasu | Add a comment |
Continue of Chapter 1

As I stepped outside a chill went down my spine. Like getting ice cubes put down the back of you shirt. The storm has stopped know but I looked up the sky was still filled with black lingering clouds. I went down the porch’s steps and started to headed towards the store but realized that I stepped in something. It was red and thick liquid. I thought it might of been a red berry but they don’t grow around here. It was "Blood!" and it was fresh.

 

The trail lead up to my neighbor’s door. I went to knock on the door but it slowly swung open. As I walked in I could smelt something putried. As I walked in I said "hello?"but no one replied so I walked further.

Following the Stench it got more foul and grim until I reached a dark room. With what little light I had I could make out two figures lying on the floor. When I reached the bodies I jumped back in horror and a sick feeling went through my stomach almost making me throw up.

Both bodies were decapitated and surrounded by blood I ran out of the house in panic thinking "This is A DREAM!", " Wake up! Wake Up!."

Every house I went to they were dead every single one! Grief stricken I fell to my knees and realized. "NO!" I got off my knees and ran to the store. I slammed the door wide open. There was blood on the floor and I followed it to its source the Tainaku’s! Their they were lying there on the floor. "NO.....Not again!". I punched the wall it cracked alittle the a heard Mr Tainaku’s voice "Maakasu......Maakasu...." " Mr Tainaku" I yelled. I knelt down beside him and he said. "Go....to Konoha.....go there and become strong!" then he reached into his pocket and pulled out a head band with a leaf sign on it.

Posted Apr 22, 2008 by Maakasu | Add a comment |
Naruo story

Maakasu Chronicles.

 

 

Prologe "Hurry he’s catching up" yelled a voice of a women. "Im coming just make sure he’s safe!"

Yelled a man with distress in his Voice. "Keep going I shall stay and stall him as long as I can" said the man, "Just get him to safety!" he demanded. "Im not leaving without you!" the women yelled in a cry. "GO!" he commanded. A tear ran down the women’s cheek. "Please", "I love you". "I love you to......but we have no choice GO!". "Hai........" as she turned away she thought "Be safe" and ran off into the night.  

Chapter one the begining

                    I awoke as I thought to myself "That dream again". My name is Maakasu I Just turned 15 last month, I live in a quite little village in the fire Country.

Not much ever happens here atleast nothing exciting. My parents died when I was a Child and I don’t remember anything of my pass. I was raise by the Tainaku’s.

They been very nice to me and raised me to become a fine man and a strong worker but for some reason the rest of the farmers shun me away calling me cursed and monster though I have no idea of whta they’re talking about. Sure my eyes are different but that shouldn’t matter.

They treat me like crap here but I don’t care the Tainaku’s seem to take care of me like a equal their the ones that matter not the other villagers.

Planting rice isn’t the greatest of jobs but if it helps I’ll do it but I dream. Dream of becoming a "SHINOBI" to know what its like to help people in the way they do, To travel, and To feel the excitement of the missions. Though It will probably never happen to me.

The Next day I got up out of my bed, my head kinda fogy since I just got up. I went to the bathroom sink and splashed water onto my face.

There was a flash in the corner of my eyes "lighting". This storm came out of nowhere. I had a bad feeling in the pit of my stomach I quickly ran to check on the Tainaku’s but they weren’t in bed. They weren’t any where in the house. I thought to my self "Where in the world could they be."

When I went outside everything was a bit to quite even for a stormy day. The other Villagers house lights weren’t on I went back in and realized there was a note on the fridge It said.

 

 

"Gone to store Be back in a bit." Mr and Mrs Tainaku.  

 

I was much less worried about them the feeling in my gut didn’t go away though. Eventually I waited so long that I couldn’t stand this feeling any longer. I went to go back outside but then I saw a shadow in the corner of my eyes. I shook it off thinking it was probably nothing.

Posted Apr 22, 2008 by Maakasu | Add a comment |