CHIDORIWEILDER

"Greek Power!"

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Hometown: Dunedin, FL, US

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Member since: 03/18/08

Last login: 11/21/08

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About Me

this place is fun and rewards us with ryo. I also love the clan feature.

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naruto, games, money, and hot girls

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all of them except country
favorite band:linkin park

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SHORT MADEUP STORY
       (5/11)CHAPTER 1:Leon Omega: Stop! You dont deserve the title of hokage, you just want world domination.Nagare Dato: Heh! You might know that , bu noone else does. Now to get rid of you.....ANNOYING PEST! Fire style:Flame Flower!Leon:(disapears....attacks from the ground, hitting Dato in the chin) Now! Falcon Drop!!!Die!!A green ooze comes out from Dato..and he explodes(replacement jutsu)Leon:Ahhhhh!(pssss shadow clone)Dato:So, it won't be easy fighting you ehh, but your skills dont compare to mine! Lighning style: 5 lighning dragons!!!!!Leon:Such moves show no match to me! Fire + lighning=magma! Magma style: Lava shield!!!!(is protected  by the dragons, which they melt)Dato:...No way!Leon:Yes, the Omega are skilled in lighning and fire style attacks, and i have discovered the magam style.Nowshadow clone jutsu!!! (original starts to perform magma rasengan while the others attack)Dato:Clones ehhh, they cant beat me, they have like 20% of your strength(one of the clones moves at super speed and kicks Dato up in the air)Leon: I thought ud say that, thats why the real me was attacing with the clones, and the clones r doing the magma rasengan.Now die tyrant!!!(The clone making the magma rasengan throws it like a projectile, landing on Dato and exploding....then a big 4 footed shadow emerges from Dato)
        (5/13)CHAPTER 2: (A 4 foot tall shadow emerges, what is it?) Leon:What the? Dato:Uhh, u forced me to show my most powerful form Leon: (laughing)Dude, u r tiny! You ar------(gets punched in the stomach) Dato:Such insolence!Don't u see, while im in this form, im unstoppable!Im swift, plus i absorb any fire chakra you throw at me! Leon:(gets up) I see..Im still not letting u become hokage! Curse mark level 2!This is a little gift i got while being captive of orochimaru!(transfroms into a green figure with his left hand turning into a sword) Ahhhh!!!!  Dato: Wind tornado!!!!(a tornado pops up, striking Leon's chest.   Leon: Ughhhh! I wont let you win! Chidori sword!(Dato counters it with a wind sword) Dato: Hah, take thi----a clone???? Leon: Hah! That curse mark was a distraction! (Leon is on top of a hill behind Dato, forming a wind rasengan) Dato:That rasengan!It cant be!!! Leon: Yes, Naruto's signature move!  Dato: But how?You r from the Omega clan!A ninja cant weild more than 2 natural elements! Leon: Its true, i was raised there. But you r looking at Naruto's grandson!(Leon runs and heads towards Dato with the wind rasengan) (What will happen? Stay tuned for the next chapter!)
        (5/15)CHAPTER 3:(Leon attack swith rasenshuuriken) Dato: Nooo!That brat Naruto!I will seek vengeance for my grandfather!!(transforms into a big figure with hard armor) (Leon stopped, then smiles) Dato:Whats so funny? My armor is inpenetrable! Leon:Your armor suit, its a reguklar style suits, and all of them have a weakspot!!!(Leon appears behind Dato's head) Thats rifght!Your neck is open!Take this!!!!!!!!............(rasenshuuriken stopped moving) Dato:Just as careless as Naruto ehh, well, flame rotation!!!! Leon:No!Im within range!(Fire burns Leon) Dato: Filthy little brat!Thats what u deserve, for having a grandfather who killed Doto, ruler of the Land of Snow. (Leon gets up, and is looking down) Dato:Whatt?? Leon: So, you r the grandson of that filthy ruler, who took over the Land of Snow. You son of a *!!! Ill kill you!!!(looks up, and u see 2 demon eyes) Dato:IMPOSSIBLE!!!How could you have inherited the nine-tailed fox??? Leon:Grrrrr!The nine tailed is a gift, Naruto gave before he died of old age, and  as he fulfilled his dream....ILL FULFILL MINE!!!!  Dato: Nooo!!! Transformation form:tiny!!(transfroms into the tiny figure from previous chapter) Now die!!!! Fire style: Orb of Death!!!(while Leon runs with his fox form on, Dato unleashes a big ball of fire above him, now who's gonna win?)
         (5/16)CHAPTER 4:(Dato throws his orb of death) Leon:You expect me to be hit by that grrr!(Leon easily dodges it) Dato:heh(the orb starts following Leon) Leon:What? GrrrrrrAUGH!!!(becomes onetailed, and uses his cloak to protect himself fromt he fiery orb)Dato: Impressive, although very predictable. Release!!! (orb explodes, injuring Leon badly) Dato:I knew you'd do that.Now to make sure u die, summoning jutsu: Zesto hammer!! (Leon looks at it with a tired look, while hes at the ground) Dato:This hammer is known as the strongest hammer in the world, made of hot iron and forbidden earth chakra, one hit of this and u die! Leon: Ill still stop you no matter what!!!! Even if u cut my body to ribbons!! Dato: As annoying as the 6th hokage ehhh? Well to get rid of you , as I did Naruto's son, Jiraya*! Leon:Uncle?? ........Dato!!!Ill kill you b*tch!!!!!(charges,hitsLeon)Wwhaaaat?How could this happen? This is the strongest hammer in the world! How can it shatter? Leon: Escaping Orochimaru's clutches was almost impossible, but i was able to do this with this!!Curse Seal Level 3!!!!My last resort! (punches Dato, he flies 40ft away)Even if it costs my life, ill kill u and protect the Leaf village!!!!!!!!( What will happen next?Stay tuned for the main partof the battle, in a double-sized chapter!!)
*I made Naruto's son Jiraya because Naruto named him in honor of his mentor, Jiraya
        (5/18) CHAPTER 5(DOUBLE-CHAPTER): (Leon curse seal lvl.3: is ina vampirelike form, with strong wings, sharp teeth, and skin that can crush any metal known to man if the user purs enough chakra to it) Leon: Ill kill you, ill take vengeance for my uncle(thinks to how his uncle was an awsome ninja, and how one day on a s rank mission, he was paired up with Dato, but Dato used a fire technique to kill the enemy, while killing Jiraya a the same time) Dato: Thats because he was a weakiling, and weakilings like youdont deserve to live! Leon: You demon!(swings his arm, making a swift hurrican chasing Dato) Dato: transform: heavy form (the hurricane is ineffective; then Leon teleports behind Dato, and  punches him 40ft away, then teleporting behind Dato again, then kicking him up!) Dato: Impossible! I can t keep u---(he gets punched again, and falls to the ground) Dato:Ughhhh poison mist!!!1(i doesnt effect leon)Dato: But how? Leon: heh,idiot. (Dato realizes that Leon is using the wind elemetn to make a current around his body, protecting him)Dato:Ughhh, enough of this nonsense!!!you will not stop me from ruling the world!! Ughh transform:copycat!!! (transforms into the same appearance as Leon's curse seal apperance) Dato: Now lets see who's stronge---(gets kicked uo again, and leon does a vampire lion barrage, kinda like a lion barrage , but hitting him while flying) Leon:You may look like me, but u r not stronger!(i must hurry this; or ill die for sure) (Dato did the subtitution, and appeared behind him, kicking him 20 feet away) Dato: A ninja has to see through deception, punk. You could have killed me you know, but you'll die idf your cursed seal take too long, and as long as i have my military rations pellets, which i ate without u noticing, ill never die before you!Bwahahahah! Leon: You cheap bast*rd! Ill make sure you die  without eating your pellets, BY HITTING YOU WITH ALL THE ENRGY I GOT! I DONT CARE IF I DIE, AS LONG AS I KILL YOU AND PROTECT THIS VILLAGE!!! AUGGHHHHHHH! (runs to attack Dato hits him with a magma rasenagn, but dato still gets up) Dato: You dont get it, every minute you get weaker, while i have eaten the forbidden rations pellet, making me 3 times stronger(although if i eat more ill die) Leon:Im gonna k......(faints, turns back to normal) (dato turns to his original form) Dato: Bwahahahahah! I won! I ki----(gets stabbed by 1000 kunais) Usuke Uchiha: This as far as you go Dato! I watched the fight, and this has been reported to leaf village by bird!  Dato:Nooo-(Usuke runs and cuts off his head) Usuke: Leon, u r the best ninja ihave ever known, even better than my grandfather(refering to sasuke)  (Usuke carries Leon to the leaf village, where he is treated immediately. He is healed, but at the cost of his left hand turning as hard as a rock) Leon: Usuke..thanks! Usuke: Its nothing, thats what friends are for. Actually, ever since our grandfathers, uchiha and uzumaki, or in your case, omega are like brothers. oh, and by the way, u have been nomitaned to run as hokage, by the orders of the 6th. Leon: Heh, grandpa. 
How did you like my story?
Posted Apr 22, 2008 by CHIDORIWEILDER | 17 Comments |

Comments:

By lighting image lighting on May 13, 2008 at 03:31:43 PM

it's an awesome story. 

can u hurry in posting the next part of the story?

By CHIDORIWEILDER image CHIDORIWEILDER on May 13, 2008 at 05:19:51 PM

yeah i feel like posting more

By lighting image lighting on May 14, 2008 at 06:30:06 AM

COOL

u r a very good author.

I'm waiting 4 the next chapter.

By CHIDORIWEILDER image CHIDORIWEILDER on May 14, 2008 at 07:42:47 AM

thanks!(im just creative with ninja stuff, other than that i cant think anything)

By ShippuudenGirl image ShippuudenGirl on May 14, 2008 at 10:02:07 PM

u should totally get an account on fanfiction

i hav one and it's perfect for stories like your

youd be like so popular and everyone would love this story

By CHIDORIWEILDER image CHIDORIWEILDER on May 15, 2008 at 07:51:29 AM

account on fanfiction? like naruto fanfiction site?where?

By CHIDORIWEILDER image CHIDORIWEILDER on May 15, 2008 at 08:17:50 AM

chapter 3 is up!

By lighting image lighting on May 15, 2008 at 01:55:57 PM

yeah and its perfect. Wink

 

By ShippuudenGirl image ShippuudenGirl on May 15, 2008 at 05:04:13 PM

www.fanfiction.com

it's a site where u write different stories. there are some about Dragonball Z, Naruto, Inuyasha, and other Anime. Plus cartoons, books and bunches of other stuff. when you hav an account u can write stories. it's awesome

By CHIDORIWEILDER image CHIDORIWEILDER on May 15, 2008 at 05:28:26 PM

its alright, but nahh i dont feel like joining anotheer site, ill just stick to hokagesroom

By CHIDORIWEILDER image CHIDORIWEILDER on May 16, 2008 at 06:12:01 PM

CHAPTER 4 IS UP

By lighting image lighting on May 17, 2008 at 02:41:54 PM

wow, he is very strong

By CHIDORIWEILDER image CHIDORIWEILDER on May 18, 2008 at 11:40:28 AM

thats because of cyrse seal lvl 3

By CHIDORIWEILDER image CHIDORIWEILDER on May 18, 2008 at 11:41:38 AM

chapter 5 is up!!!

By lighting image lighting on May 18, 2008 at 04:11:24 PM

IT'S.....IT'S AWESOME!!!!

that's what I call a STORY!

By CHIDORIWEILDER image CHIDORIWEILDER on May 18, 2008 at 05:37:57 PM

thanks!!!

By itachiuchiha31 image itachiuchiha31 on June 2, 2008 at 07:22:03 PM

thats an awesome story

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